Good fiction writers carefully research facts before they begin writing. Sounds strange, but think.
The plots of modern mysteries and crime fiction hinge on laboratory results and computer analyses. Historical fiction, e.g. Downton Abbey, loses its zing if costumes and customs aren’t described correctly. Even fantasy novels are enhanced by a few facts. The evacuation of children from
London during the Nazi
blitzkrieg is the basis of CS Lewis’s Chronicles
However, many authors are uncomfortable using scientific tidbits, historical facts, or accurate descriptions of locations in their writing. Maybe this advice will help.
Use facts to create realistic scenes, but not so many as to slow the plot.
Let’s start with the use of science in mysteries and thrillers. As a biologist, who regularly reads scientific journals, I’m intrigued by cancer immunotherapy. (Scientists are making vaccines that trigger the immune systems of cancer patients to more effectively fight their disease.) That’s the scientist in me talking. The novelist part of me says the plot and character development rule.
In my novel Malignancy, men disguised as police officers shoot at Sara Almquist twice in one day.
suspect a drug czar, who has tangled with Sara before, will order more hits on
her. When colleagues in the State Department invite Sara to arrange scientific
exchanges between the U.S.
she jumps at the chance to get out of town. Soon, she realizes Cuba offers more surprises than Albuquerque.
That’s the plot. One of Sara’s surprises is Cuban researchers have patented a therapeutic vaccine for a certain type of lung cancer (actual fact). Other surprises involve her love interest and the drug czar. The scientific facts are essential for plot development, but so are other factors.
Now let’s look at historical fiction. John Lindermuth does a wonderful job of recreating 1898 with occasional references to Teddy Roosevelt and the Rough Riders and a new motor car, without slowing the pace of Sheriff Tilghman’s investigation of a murder in Sooner than Gold. Philippa Gregory’s The Other Boleyn Girl wouldn’t have been a best seller if the book didn’t contain a few historical facts about Tudor England.
Pick relevant and exciting topics.
A great author can make any topic interesting but most of us aren’t great writers. Readers are more apt to be interested in facts that are relevant to real is
warming or curing cancer than in learning
details about biochemical pathways. Michael Crichton ( ) and Robin Cook
(Coma) were particularly skillful at
selecting scary high-tech is Jurassic
Park sues for
their thrillers. I hoped readers would find the development of a new treatment
for cancer thought-provoking in Malignancy.
Realistic locations improve any novel. The Sun Also Rises would be pretty boring without the hypnotic descriptions of the Festival of San Fermín in
Pamplona. The decadence and beauty of Venice set the mood for
Thomas Mann’s Death in Venice.
A writer of thrillers told me recently that readers accept a couple inaccuracies in a novel if you have stated most of the information correctly. I don’t know if that’s true. Certainly, Dan Brown has been criticized for inaccurate historical information in his best selling novel, The DaVinci Code, but he’s included enough facts to ignite readers’ interest.
I’m a cautious type and think accuracy is important. In Malignancy, I state the truth about the cancer vaccine Racotumomab developed by the Cubans. It slows the progression of a certain type of lung cancer. Many clinical trials, which require international cooperation of scientists and physicians, are needed to test its effectiveness. Thus, it is logical in Malignancy when the U.S. State Department sends my heroine, a scientist, to
Cuba to set up
exchanges between Cuban and American scientists.
Why not pick up copies of Malignancy and see if you like how I incorporated facts into my thriller?
Maybe you’ll decide to include more facts in your next piece of fiction (novel, short story, or blog).
Malignancy is available at Amazon http://amzn.com/1610091779 and Oak Tree Press: firstname.lastname@example.org
Bio: JL Greger is no longer a professor in biology at the
but she likes to include tidbits of science in her medical thrillers. University of Wisconsin
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