Here's a short excerpt I hope will entice potential readers to want more:
Donnelly was saddling a big
buckskin when Tom awoke. His other horse was the prettiest the boy had ever
seen, a trim mare with a glossy black coat and a white blaze on her muzzle.
“Will you take me to Foulds?” he
asked.
Donnelly glanced at him, shook his
head. “Not going in that direction.”
“Loan me a horse then and point me
the way.”
“You go up there, Foulds is likely
to hang you again.”
“Not if you give me your pistol.”
Wagging his head, Donnelly smiled
broadly. “You sure do have sand, boy.”
“Then you won’t help me?”
“Got other business.”
“You’re just going to leave me
here?” The boy hung his head.
“I didn’t bring you here, son.
Just because I pulled you down out of that tree don’t mean I intend to be
responsible for the rest of your life.” The boy’s pained expression primed that
troublesome streak of compassion again. “What are you gonna do if you get up
there?”
The boy looked up, beaming.
“You’ll help me?”
“Didn’t say that. Answer the
question.”
“Find out why they strung me up;
get my outfit back.”
“You’re going to take on Clem
Foulds and all his boys single-handed?”
“If I have to. Will you loan me a
pistol?”
“Never carried one.”
“Your shotgun?”
Donnelly laughed, shaking his
head. “Hell, but you got gumption, kid. Do you think even if I gave you my
gun—which I’m not—Clem is just going to apologize and hand over your gear?”
“He owes me,” the boy said,
firmly.
Donnelly shook his head. “He don’t
owe you nothing, Tom.”
“How do you figure that?”
“How long were you with Hanks and
Witherspoon?” He regarded the boy closely, sun glinting on the frames of his
spectacles.
“Couple weeks. Why?”
“Who did the shooting?”
“They did. I done the skinning out
and drying of the meat.”
Donnelly was nodding. “Sounds
right. Foulds must have been keeping an eye on you fellows. The other two got
off before he made his move. Probably thought they was off shooting more cows.
Strung you up as a warning for when they got back.”
The boy squinted at him, curious.
“I don’t understand. What business was it of his?”
“It was the company you were
keeping got you in trouble, Tom. Did you notice brands on any of those cows you
were skinning?”
“Some. Moon said it didn’t matter,
they was all wild cattle now. He said it didn’t matter.”
Donnelly had finished saddling. He
climbed up on his buckskin, the mare’s lead rein in his hand. “It mattered.
Moon and Dent haint the kind to go chasin’ slow elk through the brambles when
range cows are easier pickin’.”
“You do know them, then?”
There was a hard edge to
Donnelly’s voice as he replied, “I know them.” He kicked the buckskin and the
big horse moved. Tom rushed forward and grabbed at Donnelly’s sleeve. Donnelly
pulled back on the reins, pushed up his hat and peered down at the boy. “Take
me to Foulds,” Tom pleaded.
Donnelly plucked the boy’s hand
from his sleeve. “Leave it, son. You gained a few inches dancin’ on that rope.
Let it at that and choose your companions better in the future.”
“I won’t leave it,” he said,
sternly.
Donnelly stared down at him. He’d
steered clear of human connections for a long time and didn’t want any
entanglements now. But he couldn’t help liking the boy. The kid had stones,
there was no denying that. “What’re you going to do if you get to Foulds?”
“Explain to him I didn’t know they
was shooting his cows, get my gear back and go after them.”
“You sure are something, boy,”
Donnelly said, his mustache raising with a wide grin. “Look, Moon is about as
mean as they come and Dent is just plain stupid. Alone or together, they’re
trouble. Forget them.”
“I earned that money.”
Donnelly pulled his hat lower by
the brim. “Go get your boots on,” he said.
Tom beamed. “You’ll take me to
Foulds?”
“Guess you’re determined to pursue
trouble whether I lend a hand or not.” He still wasn’t certain it was the right
thing to do, but maybe the boy knew more that would be of value to him.
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What a great example of good writing! Can't wait to read this.
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